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You're dazzling!
like rearlights
well, if I squint my eyes
like I used to
from the back of streetcars,
when I was three foot
tall?
Or like that show we watched
in my early summers
in your parent's bedroom
about ghosts,
you're one,
you know.
The season returns
every month
and darling dahlias
bloom,
And fragrant are
the bottlebrushes
of
so
li
tude.
But you were
a paper rose
for an evening
of ennui,
I wonder where we
left origami
when we
grew up.
At times I think
it's a vain pursuit
finding love
and stuff,
stuff they sell
all over the place,
but love
is out of stock.
Perhaps I'm wrong,
but you were right
just right
for us.
Desserts are served
in the end
because,
they're the best,
I s'spose.
The veal, and venison
and lamb in vinegar,
are in the freezer
my dear,
How quaint and sweet
it was to eat
my ice cream
on a wintry night.
like rearlights
well, if I squint my eyes
like I used to
from the back of streetcars,
when I was three foot
tall?
Or like that show we watched
in my early summers
in your parent's bedroom
about ghosts,
you're one,
you know.
The season returns
every month
and darling dahlias
bloom,
And fragrant are
the bottlebrushes
of
so
li
tude.
But you were
a paper rose
for an evening
of ennui,
I wonder where we
left origami
when we
grew up.
At times I think
it's a vain pursuit
finding love
and stuff,
stuff they sell
all over the place,
but love
is out of stock.
Perhaps I'm wrong,
but you were right
just right
for us.
Desserts are served
in the end
because,
they're the best,
I s'spose.
The veal, and venison
and lamb in vinegar,
are in the freezer
my dear,
How quaint and sweet
it was to eat
my ice cream
on a wintry night.
Literature
Everything You Borrowed
On Sunday afternoon,
after exiting the church,
you plucked the sun from the sky
and hid it in your palms
so that when I held your hands
they would no longer be cold.
When Monday night arrived
you snatched every single star
and used my tears to make
a necklace.
Tuesday's empty dawn shone
through the cracks of the door--
you stole the promise of what
could never be
and draped it around my shoulders.
After Wednesday's twilight passed,
you grabbed the clouds
and wove a tapestry of lies
that I hung on the walls
of my prison.
Thursday crept through us
on silent tiptoes,
waiting for us to take notice--
instead, we merely waited
for midnight to
Literature
Heat Advisory
We are an air-mass thunderstorm at the height
of an Indian summer -- a cloudburst colliding
into a cyclone, raising the temperature of any
who wander through our sweaty inversion.
I soar above the earth buoyed on your thermals,
straight into a clap of thunder conceived by
lightning fever. A roiling heatwave travels
across our connection, evaporating the atmosphere
surrounding the eye of our storm. Your humid
breath wisps over the thermodynamics of my skin,
pushing cumulonimbus up the drought in my spine.
Muggy kisses trail down my body like volcanic ash,
a haze blurring the lines between our hurricanes.
And as the barometer spikes,
Literature
What I Lost
“I lost a finger,” Dolph proclaimed in a manner of startling, distant normality to his father, who had just ghosted by him into the kitchen to find something. His father paused like a clogged clock and spun suddenly on a hinge to see and confirm, and Dolph held up his hand to reveal his organic matter’s metallic replacement. “It’s just the pinky one.”
His father sluggishly pulled up a chair and printed sentences and fragments streamed from the printing compartment on his patchwork-junk face which Dolph had labored so fiercely to build and jumpstart over three years ago. Dolph reached for the re
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One of those rare works which I've seen since "Every Valentine's Day" that manages to capture so much depth. Unlike that work though, this does it with a limited amount of words, and to brilliant effect.
I think so, because of the opening. It seems to be abrupt but it isn't. There is more to it that meets the eye, as one takes itno consideration each and every moment that is captured.
Which leads to one of those optimistic endings that, I feel and I strongly support, are so much fun because they contrast with the overall plot brilliantly! Wonderful!