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she was an immaculate understanding of beauty
and made art blush a thousand times,
and the painter's brush
and the sculptor's spurl
could never quite possess her,
even in their minds.
she retired to Colmar and Vienna
never resting, never testing
the waters of time,
although they say she adored Florence
and left more men doting
than Tuscan mothers did bear,
and Cupid wept all of Styx
when his noxious darts  
fluttered not lips or hearts.

she chanced upon Zhou in Zhaoge
and left his soul in want of want,
and all his queens could not delight
the wanton thirst of Jahangir.
and so pleasured yet, and yet untouched,
the virgin maid of Gaia's cruor
witnessed the world upon Sleipner
and slept by mortal maidens all,
whispering into their quiet dreams:
a love for each, a love in reach,
and thus every man's fall from grace  
began upon yearning that changing face.


there she hangs upon my wall,
all the passion of Ilium's scattered ashes,
all the virulent venom in Iago's gall,
all the enticing verses of Fakhruddin As'ad
in strokes of imperfection
which sew intent into my unfinished senses
which legions of men before me
have sought in vivacity and vain,
yet Ithaca still remains a dream;
a star on the horizon of Marmara;
and gradually I begin to understand
how her absence holds my ever hued hand.
You tell me =)
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:icononeknightsstand:
OneKnightsStand Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
It is a very eloquent a beautiful work. Thank you for the pleasant read.
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Zark123 Nov 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much :)
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:icononeknightsstand:
OneKnightsStand Nov 22, 2013  Student General Artist
You're Welcome!
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:iconmika-ryoko:
Very nice, full of longing and yearning. I like how the final stanza is in present tense. I think it could be a few stanzas longer, though, and have a little more description. Still an aswome peice overall!
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Zark123 Mar 8, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you =) Naah. I wanted to seal it before the essence fizzled out!
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:iconmika-ryoko:
I can see your point and you did verry well:-)
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