Altair ibn La'Ahad (Assassin's Creed)

The darker shading adds contrast to your picture, which makes it pop nicely! Its a little hard to look at the technique, because the picture is so small, but it looks like you are kind of getting the hang of it. (I always use Q-tips and tissues to achieve a softer texture). Also, the anatomy of his face could be worked on, though it still looks good for your first attempt at fan art! I hope this helped a little. Message me if you want to ask anything